Hmmm... this ones quite a quick return... i thought as stated in the first one i would be back in say another months time... but then did get time and i thought would just update this...
waise i do have things as well to write about...
will tell ya a story....
lemme know ur comments
their was a guy and their was a girl... Both met... became very very good friends...very good friends indeed... Guy was going around with a girl whom he loved immensely...girl was going around with a guy whom she loved... pehla pehla pyar dono ka tha... the girl had a break off with her guy due to some very personal problems...and this guy was very much with her all the time.. consoling her... crying with her.. laughing with her... caring for her... and still very much in love with his love... Unfortunately the guy goes the same we this girl went in is relationship...however the guy does this bcoz of his reasons... some reasons he thought probably would effect his love of life... somebody whom he can never see getting hurt... someone for which he thinks is better to hurt himself and she getting a scratch...
his relation with the other girl is still the same... he still cares the same... still loves her the way he used to... now this girl feels that she probably loves this guy...this guy who has been with her in all her troubles...who has probably lived a second life of her...this guy who probably understand her much more than any other person in world... and this guy whom she thinks has the arms where she finds solace...
one fine day she opens her heart in front of him...this guy is shocked...he has never expected this to happen...this is what this guy said to her...
"..... why do we always have to come to this end. why do u think their was a need to name this. were you not comfortable with this nameless relation that we had? were you not happy that i loved you... loved you till a limit wherein you jus cant fit this in in this four words called "love". do u really think that i am going to love you more after i say yes to your propose. then you probably devalued my love. that means you probably never understood what you meant to me. that means you always loved me for a reason. that means you always hoped and wanted me to be in your life only, Yours only. and why you are doing this just because you think that i probably might fall for a different person alltogether. you probably never understood that you are always going to be a different person alltogether... probably the most important one... because this is the only relationship that i have in this world which doesnt have a name.. which dosent have a limitation...i can love you endlessly... i cant think of having a different person at your place. what you have done is limited my love to this specific word and relation called "love". have you ever thought how much you would be expecting from me hereafter. have you ever thought how much you would be hurting yourself and u will never have an idea how much that will be hurting me.
if you still have the same idea of having a relationship with me then fine... go ahead i cant stop you loving me for a reason... then fine...but then jus let me tell you...here the question of what i feel and what i want dosent arise... its all going to be what you feel and what you want"
to this the girl replied
"i want you atleast for a day"
to this the guy replied
"fine then... you anywhich ways will have me throughout your life... but if ur asking for a day... whenever i feel like... i will certainly come to you... thts a promise"
"seriously... you will???"
"yes ...i will"
with all those expectations in her eyes she says "and... and then..."
"then what...RAPE ME IF YOU LIKE"
this guy goes to her one fine day... gives her a day of his life and dies the other morning in her arms...
later when she reads his diary.. she gets a note
"i always wanted to die in the arms which were strong enough to hold my dead body. i knew my mom wont be able to do it.. dad wont be able to do it... do u know i am never afraid of a thought that you probably would be loving somebody else tommorrow. ask why? jus because i want you to love everybody in this world...they should know you are a wonderful person... i am not selfish sweets.. its just that i love you for no reason... no expectations... no limitations"
so guys lemme know was the guy wrong????
did the girl loved him??
or was the guy too good
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mindblowing story!!! and i have to know the source asap!!!
hmm i think the guy was a wonderful person with beautifully etched thoughts and he knew he cud justify his reasons for anything to anyone if he wanted to... meanin they weren't baseless or shaky and i think the girl was just what we usually are unsure, insecure abt the ppl we care abt, ppl who care abt us...our loved ones......though i didnt really get the one day concept i'd like to believe that she did actually love this guy and she finally told him which btw takes a lot of courage coz maybe deep down she thought she knew that she cudnt ever truly love someone else... so this was kinda now or never type of a situation...
now i dunno if i made sense but thats it u got what i thought!
vands
Vands...
if she loved this guy truely... then what exactly was the relationship between her and the earlier guy. and if that was love then what was this .. a attraction??? Physical to be precise????
Hmmmm..Da firstly quite a fantastic entry sweets..
Wht I feel about the guy is tht he luved the gal too much otherwise he cudnt hve thot about her feelings her limitations abt hw other pple care or luv her etc n about the girl must say the first relationship she cudnt understnd or wasnt sure whether she was really in luv or nt bt within the presnt guy she found all that she wntd bt cudnt realise frm her previous relation she found out that in luv even for a single day if ur with tht person u cn attains heights of satisfaction n happiness dat single day is thot of bein a lifetime..
No doubt u r rite, tht its nt necessary to name a relation bt one needs to knw wht relation its...so basically this wht i cud think abt this luv story..me also nt sure whether it made sense or nt bt stil my flow of thots rite before U.
N once again vry well writen Da..quite expected :)
Luv ya
Mads
hmmm i think bonnie answered ur question... there is a possibility of the girl fallin in love again. but then again the catch point in this story is the one day concept, that really demeans almost every arguement in her favor.
the guy i guess did what he felt was best and it doesnt leave even a hint of doubt that he truly, purely loved her!
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